For this piece, It is an obituary of John Deere, I would like feed back on this for some stuff you think I'm missing and stuff that is good about it. Because for my final draft I'd like to improve it. In the info there's some small words, when i typed this I forgot to put it in it says "After John's death the people of Moline, Illinois were very sad." (Click on link to see larger image.

John Deere Ad

I made an Ad for John Deere's first steel plow, I had the company logos in every four corners, the picture of the steel plow, and gave info. about how the steel plow was made and dates. I want feedback on if it gives enough general information.(Click on picture to see larger image)